Love the dinner party feast illustration! There are many mosaic floors that show the food dropped on the floor after the dinner party-- you have to wonder what the slaves who were cleaning up and polishing the floor mosaics after the party thought of that particular visual joke.
I like your hendecasyllabic couplet as well-- right on subject, and hendecasyllabic as well. I might have chosen a different monosyllable than "slabs," however, as that word always reminds me of mortuary slabs. Too many episodes of CSI, perhaps.
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